- Some aspects of the film needed to be explained more, so that the audience knows exactly what will be featured in the film.
- The ideas needed to be explored more in depth
- The narrative should have been described more clearly so that the audience knows what the film will be about, answering any questions that could of arose.
- The whole presentation could shown more depth
Action Plan:
- All aspects of the film need to be outlined, so that there are not any confusions
- The main ideas need to add up, also we need to think about them in more depth
- The narrative needs to be thought out more throughly, so we know what exactly will be used in the film
-More depth needs to be included, also more links with other films need to be drawn out, by researching.
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