Pitch Feedback

EBI:

- Some aspects of the film needed to be explained more, so that the audience knows exactly what will be featured in the film. 

- The ideas needed to be explored more in depth 

- The narrative should have been described more clearly so that the audience knows what the film will be about, answering any questions that could of arose.

- The whole presentation could shown more depth

Action Plan:

- All aspects of the film need to be outlined, so that there are not any confusions

- The main ideas need to add up, also we need to think about them in more depth

- The narrative needs to be thought out more throughly, so we know what exactly will be used in the film

-More depth needs to be included, also more links with other films need to be drawn out, by researching. 

The Pitch

The production is based around a school, it suggests that the school is very similar to a prison through its systems and practices.

The actual film will be about 3 new school children and will follow how gangs within the school try to recruit them and introduce these young venerable students, to how cash flow is distributed throughout the school. The three young characters are forced to end their friendship due to peer pressure and gang differences.

Comparisons will be made between the systems being run in prisons to those in the school, but not as extreme. E.g. Teachers will be security guards and the drugs will be sweets dinner tickets etc.

The type of goods each gang will sell will differ from one another , however the demand within the school will be as high as each other.

The genre of the short film is drama . This is because the main purpose is to inform the audience how gang culture can be created

The main setting will be the school, however at times the location will alter. As we don’t want the audience to get bored and think the setting is quiet repetitive.

Distribution Company

The company we chose to distribute our film is Pathé , this is because the organization

tend to produce films within our target audience and our challenging budget.

Also Pathé as a company have years of experience distrusting well known films

Audience

The film will appeal to an wider audience, as most individuals have experienced some sort of teaching and schooling in their lives. However, the production will demonstrate how modern schools have changed compared to the school some people may have been taught in.

Also the secondary audience can see how similar a prison can be to a school, in terms of its strict discipline rules and the values expected from each individual.

The mild reference to strong language would be why the film is classified as a 15 certificate.

Some reference will be made to drugs, as prisons are operating and exchanging this, but no actual drugs are included.

By Rohin Thind

Revolver Entertainment


Revolver EntertainmentRevolver Entertainment is a multi-award winning, marketing-lead, all rights film Distribution Company based in the UK. Most notably they have released; French noir thriller 13 Tzameti Werner Herzog's award-winning Grizzly Man urban drama Kidult hood Sundance and Venice award winner A Guide to Recognizing Your Saints starring Robert Downey Jr and Channing Tatum. As well as future titles like the award-winning follow up to Ray Lawrence's Lantana; Jindabyne. Also the smash hit movie based on the best-selling crime thriller by Harlan Coben Tell No One. Documentary Taking Liberties that takes a look at how the policy of the current government has severely affected our civil liberties and the controversial documentary Zoo that recently screened at the Sundance Film Festival.